Thursday, 3 November 2016

WALT: Use descriptive language to add interest


One day there was a little boy hoping to have a happy Halloween.

The little boy ran up to his bedroom, when suddenly his brother through a prank on him, he put a bucket of water on top of the door and the hole bucket of water landed right on top of his head.

He didn’t care about the water that tipped on his head he just jumped into his costume.

He first he put his black and white suit on, then he put his cap and put his teeth in. He went to his mum to the stuff for halloween.

He went out going to door to door saying “trick or treat”. He got a lot of lollies he had to go home and get another bag for the lollies.

Meanwhile some of his were just across the road from where he was, he quickly joined them going door to door.

Then they came to a scary house they were afraid to go in they went up the pathway as they were trembled with fear and knocked on the door and then someone came to the door be she wasn’t as scary as her place seemed.

So they all went off happy walking down the path having a fantastic halloween they said “ we’ll go trick or treating together next year” they all agreed.   


Friday, 14 October 2016


On Thursday, the last week of the holidays my family and I were excited cause we were the pools. We were all going cause my older sister thought that it would be a good idea for all of us to get out.

First, all of us had to stop cause my sister had to print a picture. Then all of us started getting impatient.

Then we stopped at new world for a feed, and that's when we started traveling to Kawakawa pools. We got there and everybody was so excited to be there all of us made a big SPLASH when we jumped in.

Finally, we had a feed again then we wanted to go, I fell to sleep half way home.

That was the best time I’ve spent with my family.   


Monday, 19 September 2016

The bee visit

WALT: Write a recount using appropriate vocabulary.

This Morning we had a visit from 2 people there names were Kathy and Dan the bee man came in and told us about bees and bee aware month they explained about how bees are important. We now know that the bit where the Queen bee lives is called the brood, then we with Kathy and looked at all the bees we tried looking for the Queen bee, we found her it was cool there was a bee that isn’t in that hive and stung him then he died. After, we went to Dan and started eating the honey once me and Jaime-Leigh found some. Suddenly all of us started eating the honey it was tasty.

Monday, 9 May 2016

Autumn leaves

Have you ever 
Heard the sound 
Of autumn leaves
Falling down?

Red and gold 
Yellow and brown
They flutter softly
To the ground.

Monday, 11 April 2016

My poem

My Poem.
Walt: Describe, using our senses.

I see little crushed up crystals.
The sight looks sugary.
I hear  popping noises.
The Sound is loud in my ears.
I smell jelly.
The smell was beautiful.
I touch rocky popping candy.
The touch was hard.
I taste blue raspberry.
The taste was sweet and sour .

Friday, 1 April 2016



In the Easter holidays my family and I were finally going to the pools. We got into our togs, grabbed a towel and headed off.

We got there, I put my feet in the water and it felt so good then my mum had payed us in. I was the first one to jump in.

We splashed the sparkling water on each other and swam in the fresh cold water. Then we jumped out for lunch, waited 5 minutes and jumped back in.

The time passed and everyone was starting to fall to sleep especially me we all decided to go so we all got dressed , had some more lunch and went home that was the best day. 

Friday, 18 March 2016

My Mihi

My Mihi.
WALT: Retell our Mihi.

Last week and the week before, Room 1 and I were doing a mihi which was all about us. 
First we had to colour in our picture. Then we coloured in our mihi(they were also pictures).  Later on we had to cut our pictures out and put the first picture and put it up top and glue the cut out ones down bottom. They looked awesome after a Mrs put them up.